first two minutes description
Title opens with film title - pushed out by the fence, and youths jump over, wearing 'normal' clothes and are relatively fashionable tinny sound of metal fence 'clangs'
Cuts to them entering the building
building is old and run down probably appears derelict, and is dirty, size doesn't really matter, as-long as the exterior from this point of view is that it is abandoned and 'dirty'.
they are then shot breaking in (shot from inside?)
shows feet stepping through the building wearing trainers or boots and the area on the interior seems dusty and again, disused the dust puffs up with every footstep and the sound is prominent.
Flashes to the future and shows what happens (bad things, the noise starts playing, (noise for the ring going on) the future shows individual heavy breathing, scared and heart beat maybe in the background.)
quiet and lonely, breath and footsteps heard, feet are seen again stepping through the floor and building rubble, dusty and misty and sound is quite loud - dominating the others.
Cuts to upstairs and then the future again, shows another individual scared and running screaming this time, more intense, heavy breathing and the heart rate/thuds returns
Cuts back to the charectors and they find the 'shrine' fast cuts here to give pace and atmospheric feelings and a strong tensity.
Shrine is full of odd items, hints are given to death and it looks very much like a stalkers hideout, momento's of people, candles, necklaces and rings but one is obviously more significant that the others.
it cuts through time, (fade, and the heart rate slowly fades in as the image does.) and they take the ring (the noise happens)?
a final cut shows the future again and the individuals flash past, all of them, scared and maybe dead this time - very intense or in pain, crying, or some bad fate happening, like flash backs to the future.
everything flashes off and a new scene is shown
The friends are together, happy and are walking somewhere, down a street, through a wood, and happier music returns, laughing and smiling, they all go to one friends house, and they are happy, they meet other friends, such as a parent and a pet, sister/brother etc, these may be shown in the previous flashes to the future, on the phone to friends explaining their situations or to counsellors or even more serious authorities worrying and panicking.
when the individuals are filmed in the building, they can be filmed from above in adams house and dust can be easily introduced, filmed literally through the cracks in the floor/floorboards.